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Post by The Smoking Man on Dec 10, 2010 19:12:11 GMT -8
Time: Day 2, Dead of Night Weather: Raining Warnings: Seriously creepy stuff, maybe some gore, secondhand smoke, GRAPHIC depictions of people burning, sexual content. Characters: Polly and Smoking Man. CLOSED.
The hour was late...very late. Some time had passed since Charlotte had left with Henning...the Deer Yard was still, only the sound of the wind and rain howling against the windows breaking the quiet of the night.
At least...for a while.
Suddenly, a shrill chime cut through the darkness, breaking this quiet...the service bell? Who would be ringing at this hour?
Especially on such rainy night, where the cold seemed to be deepening.
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Post by Polly on Dec 10, 2010 19:24:38 GMT -8
Polly had started to doze lightly, despite her worry, when she heard the bell. She gasped and sat up straight. Thinking of another bell, she fumbled at the telephone receiver until she was awake enough to realize where the sound was coming from.
The lights were off. She couldn't see anyone there. But this was her hotel lobby. Her sanctuary. She could feel the alien presence at her desk; smell the cigarette smoke in her air. She stood up slowly from her chair, not bothering to switch the lights on. She walked to the desk, automatically moving past objects she knew were there, that hadn't been moved in thirty years.
Safely behind the desk she finally switched on the lamp. Squinting with her hand against her eyes against the sudden brightness, she said to the presence, "Can I help you?"
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Post by The Smoking Man on Dec 10, 2010 20:29:47 GMT -8
"I don't know. Can you?"
The voice was a cold rasp - a male voice, scarcely above a whisper. Despite the volume, it was somehow easy for Polly to hear every word he said...in fact, quite a great deal better than he could be seen. The lamplight poured unabated onto the floor, no figure there to staunch its progress...the only trace of a person having rung the bell at all were some ashes sprinkled over it.
A puff of cigarette smoke came from deep into the room, just beyond the edges of where the lamplight could reach. The shadows seemed to have deepened, leaving only two visible points on the figure - the toes of his worn leather dress shoes on the cusp of the pool of light, and the glowing end of the cigarette he was smoking. Whoever it was, he was tall...and there was a sense of wrong about him that was steadily permeating the room.
"The weather we're having...it's rather difficult to drive in."
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Post by Polly on Dec 10, 2010 20:46:42 GMT -8
Polly pulled her hand away from her face. The lamp was bright, just bright enough to kill her night vision. Whoever was standing beyond her little circle of light remained unseen, as if his leather shoes stood empty and his cigarette floated alone in the air.
He had a voice like an old hacksaw. Harsh, rusty, and didn't care if it made you bleed. Polly could sense a whine or sneer coming from the stranger, as if he was mocking her. He was...bigger than her. Tough. Bad.
And she was old, alone, and in her dressing gown.
She could smell the smoke just as strong as if he had blown it into her face from an inch away, but she could still see his shoes standing at the edge of her light.
"We're full," she said sharply, choking on the smoke. "You're not the first person to come in out of the rain."
She suddenly wished she had left the telephone at the desk instead of pulling it over to the chair she'd been napping in.
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Post by The Smoking Man on Dec 10, 2010 21:09:54 GMT -8
With another puff of smoke, a soft chuckle filled the air. The figure was moving, pacing along the edges of the light. Back and forth. Back and forth. Leaving ashes on the ground, scattering steady footfalls into the air.
"Full? A place this large, in a town as small as Greenvale?" Another puff of smoke. He dropped the cigarette, grinding it out on the carpet under his shoe and lighting a new one behind his hand. "You're full of something, all right." Back and forth. Back and forth. The amount of smoke in the air was starting to become dizzying, shrouding the room in a grayish haze.
"But you've had a long night, by the looks of it, haven't you, Polly?"
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Post by Polly on Dec 10, 2010 21:22:02 GMT -8
Polly tensed as the man began moving. Every nerve was telling her to run. Don't think, just run. Still, she hesitated, wincing as she saw him rub out his cigarette on her precious carpet.
"Like I said, you're not the first person to come out of the rain." She spoke as harshly as she could, still following him with her eyes. "I've...already had to turn people away. Try the next town." She practically spat out the words, but she could still hear a tremor--
How did he know her name?
If he was from out of town, he wouldn't know her. If he was from in town, he wouldn't need a hotel room.
She stopped breathing for a second--one single second--and shut her eyes.
She'd done this a thousand times in dreams. Funny that she'd have to do it in life.
As suddenly as she could, she snapped off the light and ran.
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Post by The Smoking Man on Dec 11, 2010 1:35:28 GMT -8
"You would really let me go outside into that weather? After the way Charlotte came in here tonight?" His strides stilled, his voice darkening.
"Suppose there's someone out there in the rain...someone dangerous. Could you really live with yourself a second time?"
As the light was turned off, he started chuckling again, the burning ember of his cigarette now the only light in the room. He watched her as she started to run through the darkness and the smoke, biding his time for a moment...before he started walking. At least, his footfalls - impossibly stark and clear in the carpeted hallway - seemed to suggest that he was only walking...but the way the smoke and the laughter lingered JUST BEHIND Polly suggested something else.
Something about the familiar hallways seemed to be twisting, warping...the very wallpaper and paint seemed to seethe with the darkness, the carpets underfoot crunching with ash on every step.
"Why are you running, Polly?" His rasp was a mocking call, rife with his amusement. "Who are you running from?"
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Post by Polly on Dec 14, 2010 18:04:31 GMT -8
Polly ran out of the lobby and turned down a corridor. She needed help, but where would she find it? Charlotte and David were gone. Was Tamika in? Could she even help me anyway? She seems so frail...I... Kaysen! Of course! She hesitated, some tiny, dark piece of her subconscious shying away from her supposed friend. She ran in the direction of his room...
...And ran straight into a bend in the hall. She couldn't stop in time, so she held both hands in front of her to take the impact. The way continued to the right, so she slid her hands along the wall and went with it.
She must have gotten turned around in her panic. She was surprised; she didn't think something like that would happen to her...but the alternative...
There was no alternative.
But she really didn't remember putting up that hideous, decaying wallpaper.
She was itching to turn her head. She couldn't tell where the man was, or even if he was following her at all. She might have heard footsteps, but she couldn't be sure. The days she could clearly distinguish footfalls were long past, and the sound she was hearing--or imagined she could hear--was much too slow for a running man. Like a metronome beat keeping time in the background.
She thought she could feel warm, moist air on the back of her neck, but she knew if she looked she would see two glowing eyes like cigarette ends looking back at her so she stayed focused on the path in front of her and what little she could see in the almost-absolute dark. Breathe
Then that low, awful voice spoke (so close, too close...). The smoke was choking her so badly she could barely gasp, "Why don't you tell me? Who are you (breathe) and why the hell are you chasing me?" Polly didn't resort to bad language often, but the word Hell was obviously an apt description here. She pushed a few stray hairs out of her face. Her fingertips were tingling, but that wasn't important right now. Was it? "Get out of my hotel. Get out, get out get out!"
She put her hands on her head. Listening, one would almost say that her breathing had turned from gasps to sobs.
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Post by The Smoking Man on Dec 14, 2010 19:58:14 GMT -8
Thunk. Thunk. Thunk. Thunk. The footfalls remained steady, even behind her as she fled, cutting through the darkness like a rusted knife. Gradually, the rain outside could not be heard, nor the ambient noises of the hotel...only the footsteps, the man's soft, harsh chuckle. He was amused. That much was quite clear. He was having FUN, watching the old woman flee through the halls of her would-be sanctuary.
She hit the wall, turned the corner - he cleared the same corner with ease, the rhythm of his footfalls never once deviating. Thunk. Thunk. Thunk. A laugh. A draw on his cigarette, too-audible, and a puff of smoke exhaled right against the back of Polly's neck. If she paid any mind to her tingling fingertips, she would gradually notice that they were coated in ash where they had met the wall...the ash was warm, glowing impossibly in spots. The smoke thickened.
It wasn't only the cigarette that was burning now.
He only laughed at her soft screams, his voice remaining cold, even, soft and yet loud. "But Polly," he mock-pleaded, voice dripping with venom, "It's dangerous out there. Getting a little stuffy in here, though...maybe I SHOULD go get some air, hm?"
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Post by Polly on Dec 14, 2010 20:50:38 GMT -8
Even as Polly fled, she realized there was no way she could outrun this man with his calm, inevitable tread. She sucked in some air to reply and started coughing. The more she tried to breathe, the more she coughed.
She realized that the hallway was starting to get lighter. Lighter...but hazier. And the walls were glowing? "What...what have you done?" she managed to choke out through her burning, overworked lungs. But she didn't have to ask: she could feel the heat, the embers along the walls making smoke and then little flames. She turned again, this time into a room, and smothered a few of the embers with her hands. But her hands were so small, and there was so much fire, now...
She looked around. There was a door. Double doors, in fact. She shut them quickly. There was no lock, but she pulled off the belt of her robe and tied it tightly around the knobs with her numb hands, gaining a few minutes before the fire enveloped both it and her. She rocked back and forth, moaning. The fire was racing down her corridors, burning, eating forty years of her life. "No...No, please, not my hotel. Don't do this. Have mercy..."
But there was no mercy to be had, was there?
Her hands drifted down from her face. Polly could see now. She was in a circular ballroom. That was strange. A polished, dark wood floor stretched in front of her. Pink flowers dripped down the wallpaper, contrasting with the garlands of live, white roses. She could see detailed shapes carved into the gilt and wood that ornamented the room. It was like something from another century. It was absolutely breathtaking. But so was the fire racing up two of the walls toward the large crystal chandelier.
She looked around for a window, but there weren't any. In fact, she had a strange notion that she was at the exact center of the hotel, but she didn't know why.
She realized that the smoking man could have easily made his way into the room in the few seconds she'd been gawking. She whirled around, wondering what she would face...
((This post took a weird turn. Sorry about that. For some reason, the ballroom popped into my head when Polly first started running and I couldn't get it out without writing it in here. Did not know it was going to be on fire, though.))
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Post by The Smoking Man on Dec 15, 2010 2:15:20 GMT -8
...But what she found when she turned would not be her strange assailant...no, it was something else - someone else.
A couple of people, elegantly dressed, whirling about the ballroom floor as if dancing to the crackling flames. If she turned about, she would see more of them still - a dance floor suddenly full of people, laughing and clearly enjoying themselves as they milled about her. None of them seemed to even see Polly, narrowly avoiding spinning right into her now and again.
The fire flared up the walls, ashes and smoke hanging in the air and drifting around the oblivious dancers. Embers began to fall, here, there...one landed upon one of the dancers' skirts, lighting it. Steadily, the flames crept up her dress, devouring the fabric, catching in her elegantly curled black hair. She still smiled at her dance partner, paying no mind to the skin that started to crack and peel away from her lips as she did so - still kept her footing, one, two, three, one, two, three as her gown fell away in ashes from her burning body. The flames licked across her arms, the flesh steadily burning away as it reached her partner - he too paid no mind, eyes soft and fond as his own skin began to char; he reached out to caress her face, his skin and hers melted and sticking to each other so that the ordinarily soft motion tore away part of her cheek. He then returned the hand to her waist, her skin still clinging to it.
Slowly, there was another burning couple - then another - the dance floor alight with smiling agony and the scent of burning flesh, turning and stepping to the crackle of their own deaths.
Standing on the other side of the ballroom, leaning on a banister, a tall figure could be seen, dark hair and red shirt barely visible through the flames. He chuckled, reaching forward to light his next cigarette on the burning hair of one of the dancers.
"...You're on borrowed time, Polly," he rasped, gracefully pulling the cigarette to his lips. "And you've forgotten why, I imagine. Tell me why. Remember, tell me why, and I will make this end."
The dancers started to crumple to the floor, their legs burning away beneath them.
What was left of their bodies still swayed to the same inaudible beat.
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Post by Polly on Dec 15, 2010 16:51:22 GMT -8
What...?
Polly stood stunned, watching the burning spectacle unfold before her tortured eyes. Even when the Smoking Man made himself known by the foot of the stairs, she couldn't stop staring as the oblivious dancers slowly and rhythmically turn to ash.
"Stop this," she said quietly into the air. "Stop this now. If you can. What do you want from me?" Her voice started to rise. "Have I hurt you? Did I offend you when I turned you away? Is it something else I've done?" As she spoke, she turned and wiped the tears off her face, unknowingly leaving a smear of blood from her damaged hands. "I'm eighty years old. You're going to have to be more specific!" By now she was shouting. "How many mistakes do you think I've made over the years? How many regrets do you think I have? Don't you think I would tell you anything, absolutely anything I know if it would keep you from murdering a room full of people?"
A thought stopped her. "Suppose there's someone out in the rain," he'd said. "Someone dangerous. Could you really live with yourself a second time?" She stepped towards him carefully over the little piles of ashes, charred flesh and cloth. She suddenly noticed that her ratty bathrobe was now a gauzy ball gown. Her face was intense. Any trace of panic or despair had gone, leaving a deep but sympathetic sadness. "Do you think I regret not going outside that night? That I could have saved my husband, my sister? Sometimes I do, too. But then I see my children's faces. They looked so angelic back then... I couldn't have left them. I kept them safe. Do you know how important that was? Do you know how much they meant--mean--to me?
"I'm living on borrowed time, you say? Of course I am. Honey, I'm eighty years old. Every day I wake up in the morning is a day stolen from the grim reaper. Every day is precious to me. Especially when I think about everyone I've left behind; all the family and friends I've buried."
She fell silent, wondering if that was the answer he was looking for, or if he was going to eat her alive. But she had a dark little feeling that there was something more...something else she couldn't remember...
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Post by The Smoking Man on Dec 15, 2010 18:26:40 GMT -8
The Smoking Man went silent as she spoke, listening carefully to what she had to say. Behind the flames, his silhouette remained relaxed against the banister, taking the occasional drag from his cigarette and watching her advance through the burning ballroom. Initially, there was the sense that he was getting frustrated with her shouting, his shoulders squaring off...but as her words turned around, recounting, explaining, justifying...he relaxed again.
Once she had finished speaking, he took an especially long drag...then blew it out, the smoke billowing impossibly over the ballroom. It whirled through the air, thickening and mingling with the gray clouds from the burning dancers...until it filled the room in a thick fog, difficult if not impossible to see through. The light from the fires died away - only the point of his cigarette visible now in the darkness and the smoke. It started to move, slowly. It was circling her. He was circling her.
"...Good answers," he rasped, sounding rather predatory...angry? Had her words upset him? "Sincere. Touching. Sounds to me like you've got it all figured out. Hm?" Still circling. His voice was all around. "Tell me, then...WHAT killed your husband? WHAT killed your sister? You don't remember, do you? You don't WANT to remember!"
Something else started to move around Polly - loping, impossibly-bent figures in the smoke. They moaned in agony...they staggered, reaching out blindly towards her.
His voice calmed again.
"...You're going to have to. Not everyone is so lucky as your children...some are rather...upset to be forgotten. So...I'm here to remind you." One of the figures cut through the fog between the Smoking Man and Polly, eyeless sockets turning right towards her...but a grimy, ash-covered hand shot forward, hooking fingers into its mouth and tearing the creature's head backward and out of sight.
A pair of eyes leered through the smoke...eyes she had seen somewhere before.
"How about now?"
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Post by Polly on Dec 15, 2010 20:27:52 GMT -8
Polly was captured completely by those eyes. She knew them, didn't she? It felt like they punched a hole in her stomach. She could see figures around them, closing in. They all looked familiar. They were figures from her childhood, weren't they? But...wrong. Twisted. They moved like puppets, and she was shocked by a feeling of anger focused on her from all directions.
But they were townsfolk?
But they had no eyes, no teeth...
But that was her childhood neighbor over there to the left, she'd know him anywhere...
But they moved like their bones didn't fit together; she could hear the sickening noise they were making...
But she went to school with that person.
That long dead person.
That somehow wasn't in Heaven, as she had always told herself he must be.
That was what hurt the most, somehow. All these good, good people, reduced to mindlessness and hatred. Was this what had happened to everyone? Was this the 'better' place where the dead had spent the last fifty years? Her husband, her sister, her friends, neighbors, aquaintances, all. reduced. to. this. She covered her mouth with her hands and fell to the floor, wailing.
"IIIII SSEEEE YYOOOUUUUU"
"PLLEEEAAASSE KIIIIIIIILLLLL MEEEEEEE"
The tortured moans of the innocent damned struck at her as she lay sobbing in a heap on the ground. They plucked at her hair, tore at her clothing, but she barely noticed. She bled. Oh, she bled.
A long time later, she slowly lifted her head and looked at the Man. Her eyes were haunted and her words came in a slow, thick monotone. "I put my children to bed. My husband went out for a walk. He never came back.
"There was a fog that night. It wasn't a normal fog. It was thick, oily, and...purple. I could smell it. I told myself I couldn't, but I could. It smelled like cinnamon candy and my husband's breath. I was reading. I heard screams. I looked up. There was a man. He was wearing a red raincoat." She blinked. "Was it you?" she added in a whisper after a second. "He had an axe. He was chopping people up. Like wood. I got the shotgun out of the closet. My sister was there, too. She was a nurse. I thought she was trying to help people. She wasn't trying to help people. She was covered in blood before he took her.
"He grabbed her by the arm. She grabbed him by the face and kissed him. Hard. I remember her fingernails gouging his cheeks. He pushed her down. He ripped her dress down the middle and..." Polly's mouth formed words, but no sound came out. "...in the street. Right in the street. I saw him raise his axe after. I aimed the gun at the window, but my hands kept slipping. And then he cut her head off. Then her legs. Then her arms and her breasts. And then he kissed her again. And then he...
"I couldn't watch any more. I wanted to join them. I was afraid of dying. I threw up on the floor. I ran up the stairs. I peeked in the room at my babies, but they were fine. I knew I couldn't let that happen to my babies. I stood there all night. I didn't sleep, I didn't sleep. I stood there with the gun. I waited for someone to force the door or break the window. And when she did, I shot her with both barrels. Then I went downstairs and shut the door again. No one touched my children. I cleaned up the blood in the morning. I never knew her name. I never stopped having nightmares." Polly stopped as suddenly as she started and slowly rested her head on the floor. She had been crying so long her tears had started form a puddle; mingling with her blood in places and forming swirling patterns on the dark wood.
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Post by The Smoking Man on Dec 16, 2010 18:50:04 GMT -8
As she spoke, he only stood in silence - leering down at her through the smoke, watching her sob and bleed and groan out her story. There didn't seem to be much of a reaction from him...the only movements he would make were to occasionally take a puff off of his cigarette, adding to the smoke that filled the air. His head tilted to one side, almost quizzical as he considered what she had to say...weighing it, judging it.
Part of him wanted to laugh when she asked if he was the Killer from so long ago - but he held his tongue, his eyes catching an amused glint. He waited until she was all done, head resting in the puddle of her own blood and tears...and then finally he spoke again, his cold rasp cutting through above the moans and the hisses of the twisted corpses around them.
"...There...now...that's more like it. Better to face reality as it is now-" He paused for a moment as one of the figures was about to descend upon her with a crowbar - there was the clanking, echoing sound of the metal connecting with a human hand, the pop of bones dislocating, then the sickening, wet crunch of metal connecting with a once-human head. The creature fell beside Polly and melted into the floor, oozing purple blood. The crowbar fell, then melted along with it. He continued.
"...Better now than later, when you will be ill-prepared for what is to come. Everyone else is blind...no one sees. No one listens. Better that you face facts right here. After all...." He realized how solemn he had begun to sound - it made him chuckle. He started to move around her again, his voice steadily shifting around her until it was coming from behind. "...It was either turn and face the facts...or don't...and let them sneak up from behind."
He tapped the ashes from his cigarette over her, letting them tumble down upon her back.
...But as he did this, another figure stepped through the smoke - coming to a stop just in front of Polly. Unlike the Smoking Man, his dress shoes were clean, white pantlegs immaculate. The figure crouched, offering her a hand - it was the hand of an older man, wrinkled but soft.
His voice was soft, too...reassuring.
"It's all right, Miss Oxford," the voice soothed. "It will be all right. Are you ready to wake up?"
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